Progress Update 4 - For Class Critique

Since my last update,  I darkened the background in order to bring more contrast between the mixer and the background. I might also lighten parts of the mixer in order to aid in providing more contrast since the mixer currently spans a large range of the values making it difficult to truly separate from the background. I also began adjusting the positioning of the mixer and the railroads. I think this makes it more dynamic and interesting. One thing I would like to try next is having one side of the rails go back towards the background and almost vanish between the buildings. I think it might add more of a narrative quality and demonstrate the way in which this is a mode of transportation instead of a mixer with railroad arms. 


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